This picture is crooked like Enrico's picture. You kinda look chubby when you are working on your laptop. Your editing could've been better. You look really bright on the couch. You could've dimmed the light to make it fit the picture. I like that game killzone 3 even though i never played it.

 I really like this picture you took. I like the abandon house that you are in. This is a nice place to take pictures. I would like to take pictures here. I like how you are looking out the window in both windows but the other one is closed. You did good on your editing, It was done well.

The editing can have some work. Part of the bathroom stall is fading away. You are not even using the bathroom. The picture is crooked. This could've been better. I like your outfit though. The khaki joggers go well with your smooth skin. Work on your editing skills more and you will get really good.